“If it please God,
let less happen.
Even out Earth's
rondure, flatten
Eiger, blanden
the Grand Canyon.
Make valleys
slightly higher,
widen fissures
to arable land,
remand your
terrible glaciers
and silence
their calving,
halving or doubling
all geographical feature
toward the mean.
Unlean against our hearts.
Withdraw your grandeur
from these parts.”
The immensity and profundity of the
world that surrounds us cannot be expressed. Yet, somehow Kay Ryan
comes close to understanding it all through the simple way in which she describes the sculpted landscape. Despite what
poetryfoundation.org might assert, I don't think this is so much a
call for “sensory deprivation,” or the declared desire for
“less.” Ryan rather seems to describe the sort of pain and
suffering that comes with such natural wonder and beauty. Evidenced
by the line “Unlean against our hearts” (18), Ryan intimates some
deeper relationship between the individual and the presence of God.
Ryan implies a sort of heartache, or weight on the soul that
correlates with the evidence of esoteric workings in the universe.
Ryan writes as if the absence of God in daily life, accentuates the
pain of seeing such “grandeur” in nature. If only the world was
as “bland” and unextraordinary as sitting at a cubicle from nine
to five, then the lack of meaning at a personal level would seem less
poignant. Ryan also addresses human placement in the world. With the
world constantly transforming, “calving, halving or doubling”
(14-15), humans seem trivial when put in the context of geologic
time. In this sense, Ryan's work takes on a very existential tone, as she pleads for less in the world to assuage her own feelings of
purposelessness. No matter the literary analysis, this poem certainly possesses a tone of angst that appears so often in modern and post-modern works of literature.
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ReplyDeleteWhat a great reading of this deceptively bland poem. I was just reading G. M. Hopkins's God's Grandeur, followed by Blandeur. You are right to underscore the line "unlean against our hearts". Ryan is a master of meaning within meaning within echo.
ReplyDeleteKay Ryan is a woman.
ReplyDeletenot loving the white on black text. just saying, but dope analysis
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